Storyboard + Feedback

Feedback:

 - Good timing on each shot. To improve, use more range of shot types and more detail

 - Good use of time (original). To improve, add more information on sound, camera movement and        dialogue

 - Good timing and use of imagery through the pictures; makes it more visual for the audience

 - Timings are perfect and good idea using shot numbers

 - I really like the overall storyline that is coming through, to improve you could aim to add even            more shot types for a variety